Pitch 1
Friends?
Two best friends, both extremely talented in sports, always compared .However, one was superior than other , this is when jealously turns into hate.
Pitch 2
Why did I drink?
A 16 year old girl gets drunk in her prom night and wakes up next to bunch of guys . She is scared that she lost her virginity.
Feedback:
The feedbacks that I got from my teacher were positive. During feedback, she suggested me to make it like a montage for the opening scene of the first pitch.
The peer feedback that I received was positive too and according to the peer feedback they preferred pitch number one. The reason being is that that pitch is about unpopular kid makes his dream come true. This is a typical teen drama convention and this is the reason majority people of the class voted for the pitch number one.
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